Haiku

To make a connection between different panorama's in the video I want to make short poems which express in a 'to the point' way a feeling of melancholy or joy about the landscape. But I notice that it's quite difficult to write poetry in a foreign language. I try to write haiku's and each haiku has to get a development which belongs to the sort of panorama. Sometimes the number of syllabes is not correct, but it sounds better than at another one;

sky kisses red soil (5)

straight on a thin horizon (7)

heaven on earth (4!)

(it's heaven on earth - 5)

What to do; be strickt or more free?